ANALYSED THE TASK AND THE RESEARCH MATERIAL LOGICALLY, THOROUGHLY AND EFFECTIVELY
THE STATEMENT DESCRIBES A GRADE A for your folio - it mentions LOGICAL ( think graphs and comments relating to the graphs - for example "from the graph it can be seen that ........") and also that word THOROUGH - relating to business cards perhaps you should consider FONTS are they serif or sans serif? What colour is the text? Remember that comments made by you on your research sheets can count here if you have added an analysis note about images you have submitted.